Revise the following for improved style. THERE IS NO
SINGLE RIGHT ANSWER. Just demonstrate that you have a grasp of what
conciseness is and how to achieve it.
Avoid Wordy Phrases. Express each of the following
in a single word that means the same:
at a rapid rate
in close proximity
due to the fact that
Delete Needless Prefaces. Make the following
concise without losing any of the meaning:
As far as artificial intelligence is concerned, the technology is only in
its infancy.
Clean out clutter words. The following sentence is
three times longer than it needs to be. Rework it to express the core
ideas in an efficient sentence (TIP: begin with "I seek ...").
The main 'clutter' words are in bold:
Actually, one aspect of a business situation that
could definitely make me quite happy would be to have a somewhat
adventurous partner who really shared my extreme attraction to
risks.
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