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Writing and Rhetoric I

English 151

Instructor: David Sharpe
Ohio University, Athens OH

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LAB FIVE-B

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Introduction

Today we'll practice going beyond the obvious and below the surface, which is the goal of analysis.  To do so, we'll use a warehouse of original material that is part of our culture -- the experience of movies that we have often shared.

 

  1. Analyzing for Understanding

You will be clicking on a link below that takes you to an online forum. You'll be describing a scene from a movie of your choosing and adding the description to the forum.  After reading other messages posted by your classmates, you can reply or expand on what they are saying. Each topic is called a Thread (as in a ‘thread of conversation").

    1. Think of one favorite, memorable short scene in a well-known or recent movie (excluding the ones listed in the timetable for class discussion)
    1. In Word, write a brief description of the scene you have chosen, then attempt to explain how it was made memorable by the filmmaker
  • use specifics as much as possible, and consider a number of the elements that can contribute to a scene, including ones you normally you may not be conscious of, such as soundtrack, lighting, camera angles, unexpected cuts or movements, colors, dialogue
    • if you need information on character names or other details, check www.imdb.com
  • can you think of any hidden meanings, or associations, or parallels that give the scene deeper meaning and significance in the movie?
  • do as much as you can in about 150 words
    1. ‘Post’ your scene in the online forum
  1. Click on the following link and log in, select the Discussion Forum titled "Analysis"

go to the forum

      1. Add your idea to the forum -- for Subject, enter the title of the movie that has the scene you are analyzing (replacing the original line that began with "Re:"), then paste your description from Word into the message box and click "Post to forum"
      1. Browse through the messages by scrolling down, refreshing the page periodically to see new ones
      1. Reply to messages that are talking about scenes you recognize, or ask questions about scenes you haven't viewed
    1. Post another entry for a different movie
       
      1. Follow the steps above
         
      2. Check recently added messages for scenes you recognize, and reply to them as suggested above.  Return to your previous replies and see what has been added. Add more messages if you can.  Continue to the end of the lab.
         

 

  1. Revising for Style: Clarity

This exercise does not have to be completed outside of lab time.  If you don't get to it, or get it finished, you'll have time later.

    1. Read all the steps to get an overview before you click on the link
       
    2. In Word, start a new document and Save As clarity_yourlastname on your flashdrive, or on the desktop
       
    3. In your browser, open the link to Editing for Readable Style: Clarity and copy the contents into your Word document
       
    4. Don’t bother cleaning up the formatting, and add your revised sentences directly into the document
       
    5. Save your answers again, close the document, and send it as an email attachment to me with clarity as the Subject Line

 

 

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